My group consists of Deniz, Hannah and I. We decided to make our story-line very simple and easy to understand. We start of with two girls in separate house who are out getting ready to go out. These two girls are Natalie and Deniz. Deniz will ring Natalie and there will be a close up shot of the phone ringing. The girls will then decided to meet at a train station, however Deniz gets told by her mum that she must walk the dog before she leaves. Next the camera shows both girls leaving and follows their footsteps. Deniz then gets followed through the park by an unknown character. Her dogs runs away and the unknown character brings the dog too her. As the character unveils herself it turns out to be someone Deniz knows.
Meanwhile Natalie has arrived at the train station and is waiting for Deniz. As she bends down to pick something up the camera zooms in on a hand that is about to grab her. Deniz then arrives at the train station to find Natalie is not their but and item from her person is left at the station.
The last scene is Deniz and Hannah two of Natalie's friends, sitting around a radio listening to a news report about Natalie's possible abduction. Deniz tried to call Natalie again and the camera flashes to a scene of the same hand from the train station reaching to pick up the phone and then it ends.
This sounds good Natalie, as long as you bear in mind the difficulties of filming in stations.
ReplyDeleteCan you add some thoughts about the sub genre you have chosen, and how your opening fits its conventions? Try to use media language whenever you can.
-Fiona